Untitled from Jack Osman on Vimeo.
The second rough cut got a lot more praise, especially for the introduction, which gives the video a powerful and exciting introduction sure to grab the viewers attention. However our teacher though that by having all the video in black and white we were detracting from the horror of the clown. She liked how at the end the mask changes from black and white to colour as though the fantasy of the video has finally been realised, but she said it would be a more effective video if more shots of the clown where in colour, especially the closeups of the clowns face. She also thought that the introduction was slightly out of time so needs to be tightened up.
The general reaction from pupils in our media class was that the introduction has definitley improved the video, and made it more exciting.
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